On March 5, some of my students went to the School Library to meet the writer Teresa Lopes Vieira. The writer studied law but has devoted herself to writing. She described how she had written her novels and at the end she asked the students to write a text suggested by the picture that was being showed.
Two students wrote the following rough drafts:Era uma vez um político, rico e poderoso, ia na sua carroça a dormir quando há uma rebelião e ele é atacado,sequestram-no e pedem uma elevada quantia pelo resgate. A família do político paga essa quantia, e o tal político é deixado sem cabeça à porta da mansão familiar.Manuel do Ó, nº 18, 10º HOnce upon a time there was a little boy who was black as carbon. He lived in a little village, apart from the big town of Bogota, Columbia. He had always difficulties in many ways. The food wasn't always enough and every day at least ten people (old guys or children ) died. Despite the bad living he loved that place, it was his home, where he belonged.Inês Dias, nº 11, 10º H
Two students wrote the following rough drafts:Era uma vez um político, rico e poderoso, ia na sua carroça a dormir quando há uma rebelião e ele é atacado,sequestram-no e pedem uma elevada quantia pelo resgate. A família do político paga essa quantia, e o tal político é deixado sem cabeça à porta da mansão familiar.Manuel do Ó, nº 18, 10º HOnce upon a time there was a little boy who was black as carbon. He lived in a little village, apart from the big town of Bogota, Columbia. He had always difficulties in many ways. The food wasn't always enough and every day at least ten people (old guys or children ) died. Despite the bad living he loved that place, it was his home, where he belonged.Inês Dias, nº 11, 10º H
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